I thoroughly enjoyed this story the only reason I didn't give it 5 stars was because of some minor typos

absolutely awesome. ive read the book of deacon trilogy and it is by far my favorite.. this book and all other books that relate to the trilogy are truly awesome. i highly reccomend reading any of the works by Mr Lallo. he really is a gifted author and deserves much credit for his writings. thank you to the author for his gift and for sharing with the world.

I loved the series. Not only was it a good story but for the price it was a good long story. Jade, while a nice beginning, doesn't feel ended. It is left with many open ends and as many beginnings. If the price was more than what it was, I think it was .99$ , than I would be mad. But seeing as how it was inexpensive it was a fair price to pay for the work. I appreciate value of the way the series is priced. Considering there are no physical resources to producing a hard copy,this is more than fair for the writer editors and such for compensation. Please feel free to make a fair profit. But don't make me pay the same price as a hard copy of a book kudos to you for understanding this!!! I can't wait to hear more of the story, it was a great beginning. I expect to read, soon, the story of the second Myn and I look forward to it.

I just finished thew story of Jade. I wish you had made it a full book or maybe even a series. it could have been. Although short. I did enjoy it and am hoping that you continue with this world. maybe a story line involving her child and her who knows. I will keep my eye out for another book on this world.

Alright Mr. Lallo I have Been with you for a while now and have enjoyed your narratives; though rife with typos and things an editor should have caught I stuck with the storyline and have truly enjoyed the characters and worlds you have created. It is only now that I feel cheated. In Jade you are successful in creating two fully three dimensional characters and a clear descendant world from that of Myranda and the chosen only here you arrest the story in midstream. I truly hope that you continue the story of Jade in an update and not another book that I am forced to buy. I may have to abandon your story if this isn't the case. I do hope you give us more of Jade, Halfax, Myn, and Epideme.... But do not make me pay more for it... Don't you feel cheap by doing so?