I enjoyed it.

It's ridiculous that anyone, but especially you, as a woman, would sanction RAPE in this book. When a woman says no, whether to her boyfriend, her fiancé, or even her husband, he should stop; not assume that she really wants it because her body is reacting to his touch! Quit perpetuating the idea that woman always want "it" and are just too weak to realize it! I would give this less than one star if I could and I will not read any of your books going forward.

Cute story but does contain a few culturally incorrect issues.

Witty,Funny, and Wonderful Love Story. Always nice to find a touching love story. Thanks.

Great, quick read but needs editing for content & spelling errors. However, I look forward to reading more stories by Ms Lennox.

Perfect! Just what we want to be reinforcing to women, 'your no doesn't mean no if your body reacts to external stimulus.' Her nipples pebbled and therefore it's consensual? This short story is saturated with disproportionate gender power dynamics with a weak attempt at some token 'spunk' to give the illusion of strength. Even simple, short, romance stories need to be better thought out than this. I would be horrified if anyone ever treated my daughter like this!

It's a good short read. The story would be better if it were to include a little bit more of background information about the characters, their culture and situation that they find themselves in. As it stands, we don't have a clear understanding of the interactions between the main characters and their families/friends/general public and how it works. Knowing such basic information would create a more round character that in turn would allow the reader to associate with more easily. I do like the fact that the female character has some 'spunk' and of course can't forget about the attitude in her character which makes the piece so much fun to read.