I really tried hard to get through the first chapter but this book is not written very well. Typos, grammatical errors and poor sentence structuring. I would recommend the writer work on character development as well.

I love the book I suggest reading it if your into romance,thriller, and supernatural it’s great for you

I read the first paragraph and was so annoyed at the horrible use of grammar I am 14 and I probably could have written it better.

I have loved other books by this author, but this one fell short. The story ended before it really began. It’s like she cut it off to make more books in the series. I doubt I will read the rest of it. The story really lacked depth. I didn’t realize it had a “7 book bonus” which included lots of annoying advertisements in between each one. Each book is part of a different series. Which would be great if I could jump to the ones I wanted to read instead of scrolling through all 5000 pages. So I didn’t bother reading. Those either.

Love the book but didnt like that there was other different stories in there.... it confused me too much.

Just finished reading a compilation of the 1st books in some of Chrissy Peebles series books. Though she writes in a different style & genre, & writes about young people, she appears to have as much talent as a young Nora Roberts. The imagination, & diversity, in her intriguing stories is interspersed with interesting science facts, & her action scenes are very well thought out, realistic & well written. Though I’m now a grandmother I can honestly say I enjoyed the books that would probably be well received by women from 13 to 25; though I skipped the book for the Zombie series, due to lack of interest, if it is as well written as the others I believe young men would enjoy her stories also.

It’s not all that well written. It idea that a girl is told by someone they want to kill her and she’s not alarmed, doesn’t leave? Not plausible. The dialogue is stiled and unsophisticated. I got 3 chapters in and gave up. Not a good read.

I read this book simply to determine if it was age appropriate before I allowed my daughter to read it. The byplay between characters is ridiculous and nearly every character seems bipolar and in denial. They fluctuate between life threatening fear and jovial game play as if they’ve forgotten the former. I wouldn’t suggest this childish book to even a novice. So many phrases are utterly wrong or misinterpreted and it’s poorly written overall. If errors and plot holes are not your forte, avoid this.

I couldn't get 30 pages into this book before calling it quits. The way it was written is horrible and the dialogue is so childish that it looks like a 12 year old wrote it. Teenage girls do NOT talk and obsess over a guy like that. From what I read, the book was 98% dialogue 2% descriptions.

This book sucked.