I don't mind the grammatical errors as I am able to use my imagination and pretend everything is correct. The storyline was well written, though it does get a bit confusing at times with the plethora of characters and perspectives. My only real gripe is that a few characters(such as the 'driver') were introduced without the reader ever learning their fate. Other than that, the book still gets 5 stars. *This is the only book from the store I felt was worth paying for and I intend to purchase the next in the series.

Too many characters, too much sophomoric humor and too many pages