Really bad execution. Dear Writer, if you’re doing your own proofreading and editing, stop it right now! There are more piddling little errors than I can shake a stick at, and it’s not a series of one-offs. If I highlighted all of them, I think every single page would have yellow splotches, and some pages might be more yellow than not. Please, please, find a competent proofreader and an experienced editor, and then let them do their jobs!

Brain candy, enjoyable.