Just could not get into this book. The way it is written is just bad.

Hard to stay interested. The long rants on Alice’s introspection, feelings, and personal progress took over the narrative and drained any suspense or attachment from the story line. The boyfriend was as wimpy as Alec was whiny. I tried to stay with it but there was nothing to care about tossing in a serial killer as an after thought, just added to the poor narrative. Like a fruit cake there were a lot lot of chopped up pieces but no real direction or backbone to hold the divergent ideas together. The second star was because there were many possible lines. They just never came together.

Too much inner dialogue. Fun read otherwise, keeps you guessing.

It’s was hard to read at first bec the writer’s style seems rambling with too many unneeded info to my mind and with a dose of grammar errors (literally like this sentence of mine lol), but I do love the plot and the story is an interesting read for me. Thanks Patti for this free iBook! Z