The character develop really fast but not in s good way. The story had an rpg feel to it. For the most part for a free book it's good.

Just was awesome!!!!!!!!!! NEED TO FIND THE SECOND BOOK!!!

Cliche, predictable, overused ideas and character personalities, unsurprising plot twists, a story line that progresses too fast for its own good (doesn't flow all too smoothly or naturally), and many flat characters, including the main. (At least for those who are used to rich fantasy worlds, such as Sword of Shannara) I almost had to put it down and only my love of books and anything fantasy kept me going. However, the original ideas were neat and the sword was very intriguing. I encourage the author to keep writing, as I know that overtime they will improve.